Friday, May 8, 2009

Haiku, Here's The Game...

With seventeen syllables, there's no room for error...

Developed in Japan toward the end of the 17th century, Haiku consists of three phrases of five, seven, and five syllables. The art is framing reality in an instant and lock the poet and reader into sharing the same experience.

Haiku may have developed from an even more ancient Japanese poetic style, katauta, which was the question-and-answer play of one god with another. Katauta follows the same haiku pattern of 5-7-5 syllables, for a total of 17 syllables; "the length of one human breath".

Here's "The Game":

Add your own ORIGINAL haiku poem in the comments. Write about whatever touches, moves and inspires you (G or PG please). The goal is to create a book for publication.

Results 1: Community reads this Blog
Measure 1: Visit Counter
Statistic 1: 100 visits in 24 hours


Results 2: Community is touched, moved and inspired to create haiku
Measure 2: Number of haiku entries
Statistic 2: 100 entries


Results 3: Poems are compiled and published with proceeds to charity
Measure 3: Publication of compliation book
Statistic 3: 1 book


Here are three I've written:

The Game
Over there, beats here.
Everything-nothing gets dull.
Therein is the game.

Life
It's not a preview
The Feature Presentation
Why are you waiting?

Transformation
Hmmm, just what does the
butterfly remember of
the caterpillar?

On your mark, get set, ...GO!

MSS

24 comments:

  1. Watch the setting sun
    Don’t wait for another time
    Stop and live life now

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  2. Dee (and everyone) make sure to give me enough contact info to credit your submission appropriately. Thanks.

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  3. Riding train from work.
    Going green and saving trees.
    Nice beach scenery.

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  4. May you smile so much
    To put wrinkles on your face
    Just think about this

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  5. So I had to look up how many syllables there were in smile. http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20080315201012AAnXS5d

    This second reference exactly fits: http://wiki.answers.com/Q/How_many_syllables_in_the_word_smile

    So I am using the one-syllable version.

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  6. Older than yester
    Yet younger than tomorrow
    Live life for today

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  7. Never have enough
    People make the world go round
    Want to be my friend

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  8. I woke up today
    Beautiful sunshine abounds
    Even on dark days

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  9. Dear Mark need info
    What kind of contact info
    Do you want from me


    See, I can make my question into a Haiku. :o)
    Craig Borden
    craigborden1@gmail.com

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  10. Agreement I have
    To not spam the Trainiacs
    No Haiku from them

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  11. These poems are fun
    Never know what they will be
    Until you think deep

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  12. Spewing forth Haiku
    Forgot to title my work
    Please do it for me

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  13. today, tomorrow
    my happiness and sorrow
    it's my choice again

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  14. Mother

    The love of a mom
    No strings or obligation
    Unconditional

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  15. Hugs

    The power of touch
    Bad feelings turn into good
    Hug someone today

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  16. Music and Spirit
    Together with Harmony
    Create Unity

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  17. My girl is beauty
    impetuous, very bright
    Crazy Wild and Fun

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  18. Looking to Spirit
    Living deeply my belief
    All good I create

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  19. Stop and smell the rose
    Live life fully here and now
    This is all there is.

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  20. Hanging in the sun
    You and I are having fun
    As two become one.

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  21. MY FATHER

    Father mine devine
    Breathes his breath in rhythmic time
    GOD keeps him in line

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  22. Sally Keefer
    LISTEN
    Hear my story now
    don't tell me what you think now
    be here for me now
    ______________________________________
    Sally Keefer
    CHATTER
    pandemonium
    In your head is the chaos
    It's only a test
    ______________________________________

    Sally Keefer
    CREATION
    Choose the life you want
    The thoughts zip by in your head
    Catch one let it out
    ___________________________________

    Sally Keefer
    ACCEPTANCE
    Be with who you are
    Freedom is in the loving
    of every moment
    ____________________________________
    Sally Keefer
    JEWELS
    I see the sea glass
    It shines for me in the sun
    Green, amber, cobalt
    ________________________________________
    Sally Keefer
    GIFT
    Beautiful heart rock
    solid and timeless treasure
    waiting on the shore
    __________________________________________

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  23. Sally Keefer
    LIFE
    What you think it is
    It is occuring to be
    What you make it mean
    _______________________________

    Sally Keefer
    STATUE
    Stone or maybe clay
    Expresses the artist's dream
    fading and crumbling
    ____________________________

    Sally Keefer
    FRIEND
    No question or doubt
    Always knowing you are there
    Connected with Love
    _____________________________

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  24. PROCRATINATION, Waste of Time

    Time thinking about
    Things I should be doing now
    But don't take the time

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