Developed in Japan toward the end of the 17th century, Haiku consists of three phrases of five, seven, and five syllables. The art is framing reality in an instant and lock the poet and reader into sharing the same experience.
Haiku may have developed from an even more ancient Japanese poetic style, katauta, which was the question-and-answer play of one god with another. Katauta follows the same haiku pattern of 5-7-5 syllables, for a total of 17 syllables; "the length of one human breath".
Here's "The Game":
Add your own ORIGINAL haiku poem in the comments. Write about whatever touches, moves and inspires you (G or PG please). The goal is to create a book for publication.
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Here are three I've written:The Game
Over there, beats here.
Everything-nothing gets dull.
Therein is the game.Life
It's not a preview
The Feature Presentation
Why are you waiting?Transformation
Hmmm, just what does the
butterfly remember of
the caterpillar?
MSS
Watch the setting sun
ReplyDeleteDon’t wait for another time
Stop and live life now
Dee (and everyone) make sure to give me enough contact info to credit your submission appropriately. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteRiding train from work.
ReplyDeleteGoing green and saving trees.
Nice beach scenery.
May you smile so much
ReplyDeleteTo put wrinkles on your face
Just think about this
So I had to look up how many syllables there were in smile. http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20080315201012AAnXS5d
ReplyDeleteThis second reference exactly fits: http://wiki.answers.com/Q/How_many_syllables_in_the_word_smile
So I am using the one-syllable version.
Older than yester
ReplyDeleteYet younger than tomorrow
Live life for today
Never have enough
ReplyDeletePeople make the world go round
Want to be my friend
I woke up today
ReplyDeleteBeautiful sunshine abounds
Even on dark days
Dear Mark need info
ReplyDeleteWhat kind of contact info
Do you want from me
See, I can make my question into a Haiku. :o)
Craig Borden
craigborden1@gmail.com
Agreement I have
ReplyDeleteTo not spam the Trainiacs
No Haiku from them
These poems are fun
ReplyDeleteNever know what they will be
Until you think deep
Spewing forth Haiku
ReplyDeleteForgot to title my work
Please do it for me
today, tomorrow
ReplyDeletemy happiness and sorrow
it's my choice again
Mother
ReplyDeleteThe love of a mom
No strings or obligation
Unconditional
Hugs
ReplyDeleteThe power of touch
Bad feelings turn into good
Hug someone today
Music and Spirit
ReplyDeleteTogether with Harmony
Create Unity
My girl is beauty
ReplyDeleteimpetuous, very bright
Crazy Wild and Fun
Looking to Spirit
ReplyDeleteLiving deeply my belief
All good I create
Stop and smell the rose
ReplyDeleteLive life fully here and now
This is all there is.
Hanging in the sun
ReplyDeleteYou and I are having fun
As two become one.
MY FATHER
ReplyDeleteFather mine devine
Breathes his breath in rhythmic time
GOD keeps him in line
Sally Keefer
ReplyDeleteLISTEN
Hear my story now
don't tell me what you think now
be here for me now
______________________________________
Sally Keefer
CHATTER
pandemonium
In your head is the chaos
It's only a test
______________________________________
Sally Keefer
CREATION
Choose the life you want
The thoughts zip by in your head
Catch one let it out
___________________________________
Sally Keefer
ACCEPTANCE
Be with who you are
Freedom is in the loving
of every moment
____________________________________
Sally Keefer
JEWELS
I see the sea glass
It shines for me in the sun
Green, amber, cobalt
________________________________________
Sally Keefer
GIFT
Beautiful heart rock
solid and timeless treasure
waiting on the shore
__________________________________________
Sally Keefer
ReplyDeleteLIFE
What you think it is
It is occuring to be
What you make it mean
_______________________________
Sally Keefer
STATUE
Stone or maybe clay
Expresses the artist's dream
fading and crumbling
____________________________
Sally Keefer
FRIEND
No question or doubt
Always knowing you are there
Connected with Love
_____________________________
PROCRATINATION, Waste of Time
ReplyDeleteTime thinking about
Things I should be doing now
But don't take the time